i continued with the day 5 update. It happend after the line "It left me shaken as i wanted to console..." then after that i just can't read anything else
Here are some suggestions just because I've been patreon to some- gallery with vn, polls on what character to work on first, sneak peeks at CGs which will be included in the game. This is personal opinion, but you'll want to avoid offering rewards which are time consuming- knew someone offering to type up side-stories as a benefit but it was a turn off because that meant they were working on something other than the VN project.
*Urge to date all of them intensifies* Oh boy, here we go again...
Great game so far, characters are quite interesting and the story narrative has gotten me curious. Also, the character portraits are very sexy - kudos to the artist. Looking forward to see how this progresses
Uhm... Here's the thing, I can't update yet because my laptop got busted. But, I'm putting all my coding into pen and paper gor the time being. I will update as soon as my laptop gets done being fixed
right before they were plotting to prank edan it reminded me of a "particular novel" then when I saw "the giant of harusu" the goosebumps got into me haha a man of a culture heh
Cool! Just wanted to give you a heads up that it's not saying what you want it to say (I took like 6 years of Latin in school like the big nerd I am instead of taking a more useful language ;p )
"Un" should be "Unus"
"Solis" should be "sΕl" (solis would be "of the sun ")
"ad" means "to", like "to the store". The best word to use for "upon" would be the accusative preposition "super", which would mean "terrae" should be "terram" as the direct object needs to match the case its preposition is used for.
No prob, thanks for taking this so well lol; a very popular VN has a very wrong bit in it but didn't like me correcting it.
But yeah, although no country speaks it as a language, it's very useful as a bridge to learn romance languages and for learning grammar in general, as it's very systematic.
Oh, I don't exactly know Latin but I had interpreted solis as a form of sΕlus, not a form of sΕl, lol. So I guess that would have been something like "from a lonely one to the Earth." Probably still inaccurate even for that meaning though; I dunno.
Lacking depth and length, interactions feel too shallow. Would like a visual of Eric. Music is too quiet (not the selection, the actual volume). I chose Pancakes, but it gave me doughnuts. Needs to be some more expressions or even body language. Overall seems like a god tale, but right now seems rather quite flaky...
You will, I know you can, this was only the initial release, so it being perfect is not to be expected, but also perfect for getting initial reactions on how to improve. You do not need to follow what any of us say, but I know I'm great for coming up with potential ideas on what to do if you are unsure/stuck on something. No need to take the ideas as presented either, even an idea that doesn't quite fit, can help with an idea that does.
Presentation was fine so far. I'm not sure what the point of the dog shape in in main menu is, but that's okay. I know this is early build of it, but I found myself getting names of characters mixed up, I think you've got 3 different characters with names that start with 'E', so I kept getting them jumbled up in the restaurant scene. I really like the side images you used.
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uh i think i need help with this
Okay, I'll make changes on that later. Thanks for posting that.
Also, may I know if you continued from a save?
i continued with the day 5 update. It happend after the line "It left me shaken as i wanted to console..." then after that i just can't read anything else
Also, its a great story and really great remake art too :3
Kinda sad if Edan founds out we're Emma :< the tiger is too precious
Yeah, so the problem might stem with continuing with an old file... I'm sorry if I forgot to anticipate that.
And also yes. The tiger is precious.
Thanks for the replying, keep on the great work <3
How many love interests are there in the game?
I have seven love interests in plan.Scratch this, I have nine in plan now.
I love this game so I was so happy when i saw you updated it! Do you have a schedule or do you post it when you feel the update is enough?
Honestly speaking, I don't have an update schedule. And I'm really slow with writing...
Sorry for the late update. Hehe
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When next update hyped for next drop
Will there be a mac version?
I'm going to publish one soon. There's just a bit of a delay with the update because of the holidays going by. But I'm going to provide one soon.
Thanks for your support!
Just played this and find it fun. Will there be a patreon page?
I'm planning on it, but I'm not sure just what to give out to patreons if I did... So it's in the cards, but maybe still need some more planning.
Here are some suggestions just because I've been patreon to some- gallery with vn, polls on what character to work on first, sneak peeks at CGs which will be included in the game. This is personal opinion, but you'll want to avoid offering rewards which are time consuming- knew someone offering to type up side-stories as a benefit but it was a turn off because that meant they were working on something other than the VN project.
Ooohhh. Thanks for your tips! I'll be sure to think on it more then. I really appreciate your comment π
I am enjoying where this story is going! Also loving the characters so far! :D
Thanks for the support!
Love lots. π
I like where this is going cant wait for more I'm addicted.
Don't worry. I'll be sure to update it. Just as long as I don't experience any writer's block. Hahaha.
Thanks for the support! ππ
I loved your art. ππππ½
I was drawn by the story.
Keep it up It's something worth it.I enjoyed and I'm excited about the upcoming updates
Thank you for your hard work. ππ€π€ππΎ
Thanks for you guys' support! π
*Urge to date all of them intensifies* Oh boy, here we go again...
Great game so far, characters are quite interesting and the story narrative has gotten me curious. Also, the character portraits are very sexy - kudos to the artist. Looking forward to see how this progresses
Aaawww. Thanks a bunch!
I'm planning a lot of things. So give me some time to take it to writing.
Love lots! ππ
What does Ellie stand for? Elias?
Elijah. But I suggest not calling him that. :3
they were cute chibi guys, now bara daddies. WTH
SHEESH!!!! These glow ups!
I know right. Hahaha. Just keep in tune for the updates. I'll upload them soon
Can't wait for the next update! :)
Soon. Just give me a bit more time.
Going from Cute to Bara, damn! When update to story comes, I'll be even hungrier!
Thanks for the support! I also made some changes in the story.
Thanks for still being here! π
so uh a few ploblems with this game that i think it needs to be fixed
it keeps lagging every few minutes at my gameplay only the game is lagging not my laptop (and it works really slow)
but besides i love you're game and i hope i have this kind of lifestyle one day
NSFW?
When is the next update
Uhm... Here's the thing, I can't update yet because my laptop got busted. But, I'm putting all my coding into pen and paper gor the time being. I will update as soon as my laptop gets done being fixed
I see, I'll be patient then.
right before they were plotting to prank edan it reminded me of a "particular novel" then when I saw "the giant of harusu" the goosebumps got into me haha a man of a culture heh
Thank you. I do the best that I can.
Hi, i was curious what you want "un solis ad terrae" to translate to? Did you get this phrase from somewhere?
It's just from some latin that I studied before. It just means "A Sun Upon the Earth"
Cool! Just wanted to give you a heads up that it's not saying what you want it to say (I took like 6 years of Latin in school like the big nerd I am instead of taking a more useful language ;p )
"Unus Sol Super Terram"
Oh wow. Okay, I will do that. Hahaha. That's really informative, thanks a bunch! ππ
Also, 6 years of latin is super cool. Studying a "dead" language is so awesome!
No prob, thanks for taking this so well lol; a very popular VN has a very wrong bit in it but didn't like me correcting it.
But yeah, although no country speaks it as a language, it's very useful as a bridge to learn romance languages and for learning grammar in general, as it's very systematic.
Oh, I don't exactly know Latin but I had interpreted solis as a form of sΕlus, not a form of sΕl, lol. So I guess that would have been something like "from a lonely one to the Earth." Probably still inaccurate even for that meaning though; I dunno.
Lacking depth and length, interactions feel too shallow. Would like a visual of Eric. Music is too quiet (not the selection, the actual volume). I chose Pancakes, but it gave me doughnuts. Needs to be some more expressions or even body language. Overall seems like a god tale, but right now seems rather quite flaky...
Thanks for that. I'll try to do better. πππ₯Ί
You will, I know you can, this was only the initial release, so it being perfect is not to be expected, but also perfect for getting initial reactions on how to improve. You do not need to follow what any of us say, but I know I'm great for coming up with potential ideas on what to do if you are unsure/stuck on something. No need to take the ideas as presented either, even an idea that doesn't quite fit, can help with an idea that does.
Input name: my butt
They got my name wrong
It sounds cool though
Maybe I'll use it as a nickname from now on.
Me: oh YES it does sound cool lets use it.
Also me: hehe
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!
Grrrrr
:0
Presentation was fine so far. I'm not sure what the point of the dog shape in in main menu is, but that's okay. I know this is early build of it, but I found myself getting names of characters mixed up, I think you've got 3 different characters with names that start with 'E', so I kept getting them jumbled up in the restaurant scene. I really like the side images you used.
Oh. Thanks. Haha. It's hard to think of names... ππ
Thanks for the support
That remind me of when I started to play MMORPGs I used to creat names always with the 1st lettle of my name.
I used to end creating a P"family. Heheh
Porque coisas NSFW Γ© muito bom
No hablo EspaΓ±ol
That's Portuguese, but it still doesn't make any sense regardless. I think it's missing punctuation to be readable.
Oh... My bad... π
This story sounds like mine I was going to move in March from last year but I couldn't move. Lol But my best friend is my cousin.
Oh wow... *Looks around*
You need to be silenced.
Just kidding. Hahaha.
Wuite the coincidence though. π
Meow.
Maybe, I wouldn't mind to be silenced with something that tastes good. Heheh
Bonk! Go to howny jail
Nuuu now I gonna die virgin.
I would prefer a good restaurant. Heheh I love taste delicious foods.
But I prefer cook myself. Heheh Meow.
Anyway good time developing the game there.
Hahaha. Thanks for the support. π
Will this be NSFW? Looks pretty good so far:P
Hhmm... I'm thinking about it. But maybe? Hahaha
Always have someone asking those questions! Heheh
Ominous whisper: do it
Ellie is a bit of a strange name for a guy...
I guess? Hahaha. But it is what it is. :3