Loving this so far! I'm liking Marc a lot lol. Then we have Jack... this man is almost definitely an ex of someone or something like that lol. Can't wait for more!
Firstly, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed playing your game. It's a pleasant, rather light hearted experience with an abundance of generally well defined characters who appear to have their own lives outside the MC and a mystery I'm looking forward to explore. Plus the backgrounds are quite nice and contrast rather well with the colourfulness of the characters.
Secondly, I've got to compain a bit. You could desperately use an editor - the numerous grammatical errors, awkward phrasings and unnatural repetitions of nicknames (like "child" or "big guy") ruin the experience quite a lot. Also, certain events are a bit too silly and cliché for my liking - the phone calls that happen at just the right times or the MC leaving his phone on the table at that one party come to mind. Additionally, 90% of the characters have identical or nearly-identical bodybuilder-esque body types which makes this visual aspect of the game appear rather lazy and uninspired and it caters to just one particular target group, while those who prefer different body types (like lean, fat, musclegut etc.) or to have a variety of choice in that aspect are left with nothing.
The creator has been on a hiatus for a while as they are currently trying to do a revamp of the sprites. I can only assume they will also be working through a whole bunch of other things, maybe including but not limited to bugs and typos.
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Still alive😭😭😭 hey toreso wazzupppppp
我喜欢这个故事 期待他们的故事
Good luck to the creators..I hope there is a route to choose edan as a partner😭🙏Bahasa Indonesia:
There will be. ❤️
嘿 新的插畫非常不錯 但為什麼沒有看到🐻？ 你是否把他給漏掉了？？？❨雖然已有58天的時間了，你好俺是個新來的很期待你的新版喔 繼續保持下去😊❩
请加油 ，插画很不错哦 感谢您的奉
谢谢！我尽力了。另外，我用的是谷歌翻译，所以对错误深表歉意。
满满的爱,
-Toreso ❤️
Hi
is this abandoned???
Not yet. Just very busy. I'm sorry... 😞
ooh ok :D
i still have hope for this project.
I will wait, even if the earth dies I will wait ❤️
Toreso are u de.... ,you know?
Wazzup toresoo still no update but I can wait hope u doing good
I miss this game 😞
SFW or NSFW?
Still no sign of toreso🤧 but still hoping
I'm still heeeeeere. Just busy with work... I'm sorryyyyyy.
Ohhhh yey hehehe
Are u stil... u know... di
Any updates on the update?
Loving this so far! I'm liking Marc a lot lol. Then we have Jack... this man is almost definitely an ex of someone or something like that lol. Can't wait for more!
Hey Author hope you are doing well i just want to ask is this game finished?
noted, thank you very much <3!!
Marc has the same body as Lars from After class, I'm wondering if most of the characters were traced
Hi toreso i'm back how's your work hope your doing fine
How's progress coming along? I hope you are doing fine :)
I am also encountering an error after the events of Ellie getting drunk, is this normal?
Can you send the error?
Yes, After hours
I'm really enthralled by Ellie. I wanna feel his spooning so baaaad.
I love Jack.Ellie and Marc they so cute
Firstly, I'd like to say that I really enjoyed playing your game. It's a pleasant, rather light hearted experience with an abundance of generally well defined characters who appear to have their own lives outside the MC and a mystery I'm looking forward to explore. Plus the backgrounds are quite nice and contrast rather well with the colourfulness of the characters.
Secondly, I've got to compain a bit. You could desperately use an editor - the numerous grammatical errors, awkward phrasings and unnatural repetitions of nicknames (like "child" or "big guy") ruin the experience quite a lot. Also, certain events are a bit too silly and cliché for my liking - the phone calls that happen at just the right times or the MC leaving his phone on the table at that one party come to mind. Additionally, 90% of the characters have identical or nearly-identical bodybuilder-esque body types which makes this visual aspect of the game appear rather lazy and uninspired and it caters to just one particular target group, while those who prefer different body types (like lean, fat, musclegut etc.) or to have a variety of choice in that aspect are left with nothing.
Still, all in all, good job so far.
The creator has been on a hiatus for a while as they are currently trying to do a revamp of the sprites. I can only assume they will also be working through a whole bunch of other things, maybe including but not limited to bugs and typos.
Ooohhh. Thanks for the heads up. I'll try to make the sentences as natural as possible...
I just need a bit of time to do so... :3
Anywho, love lots! ~ ❤️❤️❤️
So how is the work going with new sprites?
Progress got a bit delayed, I posted an update just a moment ago.
Toresoooo 😭😭😭 i swear to god i'm dying HAHAHAHA JK
Loved this, I swear I want to marry that bear
Same, LOL
Really lovely characters and art , especially the chibi portraits ,cutest thing i have ever seen !!! Loved everything so far, cant wait for more 😆!!
Aaawww. Thanks a bunch. Although the main sprites would be changed.
The chibi portraits would stay though.
Thanks for your support.
Love lots~ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
Hello there! I just wanted to say that I loved this visual novel too much, I hope you continue with it and good luck with the new models!
Hey toreso i'm back just checking on you hope you doing fine, ummm hehehe are you done yet i miss cute Edan and Mr. Buck
Still on hiatus huh, its fine, tho gambare toreso!!
Hey toreso just want to say hi hope your doing okay and can't wait for the new model and for the update
I'm doing awesome. Thanks for checking up on me!
I'm making the new models good, so wait for it. ^3^
I.CAN'T.WAIT.
HAHAHA.
LOVE LOTS!!!
Gostei muito do jogo arte bonita espero que continue^^
Vai continuar, não se preocupe. Espero que seja uma boa tradução. é só google tradutor.
Amo muito ~ ❤️❤️❤️
Goodluck Toreso
Thankies.
Love lots ~ ❤️ ❤️ ❤️
i have a question when will the map come into play?
I'll try to implement it. But as of now my coding skills are limited. Hahaha.
I'll put it once I've started with the routes